Hi guys, I'm skipping the Friday update and giving you an early one for Wednesday. I'm also skipping the update for next Wednesday. I'll be in Vancouver, where I won't have a scanner. I'll still be working on the comic and on charactor sketchs for the About section! Don't hurt me : D
This turned out OKAY. I love the concept, though. I really like the panel where Miles starts to cry. It's VERY shojo, which I was going for. However, the next one didn't have the bodies quite right. Oh well T.T
Sometime in the future when I own a tablet, I will take a week off to redo my previous pages. So these aren't permanent, they're just so you can know the story. The text is readable, though I handwrote it. I will try typing again in the future, but for now handwriting is easier to read, I think.
BTW, thank you to the two people who have contacted me so far saying they like the comic. I'm not naming names, but you know who you are. Tell your friends and let's make Down the Rabbit Hole webcomic history!
Argh... so frustrated that I can't read this! Well, I have a small screen, but some of you might as well.
Benji: Hey, the lights are on. That's weird...
Sawyer (thoughts): Maybe... maybe we will survive.
Benji: Y'know, you're kind of pretty. Hmm.
Sawyer: You are such a freaking pervert! And what's with the tone of surprise? We are in a dungeon, we need to get out! Stupid hormonal IDIOT!
Benji: Okay, okay! Geez, could this day get any weirder! What the heck!
Because y'know what? I just felt like doing a color page. I might be giving you guys another update today. I'm trying to get people to actually read the comic, so I'm putting info about it around the net. USE THE FORUMS. I wanna see what you think and the comic is actually getting interesting now. OOO, looks like Sawyer's gotta crush. I just love the next page. You're getting a new charactor, one who you may have seen on the about section before...
Another lazy page, oh well. At least ya got something. I'm drawing the other page in a sec, so chill.
Damn, it's unreadable. You guys get: subs! Mmk, W= white balloon, G= gray. DUH.
W: Hmm? Where am I? What's happening? Hello? Is anyone there? Why am I not hurt?
Wasn't the manhole smaller? Hello...
G: Shut up. I've been in here for days, asking myself the same question. So just... shut up.
W: You aren't speaking German and neither am I. How can I understand you? How...
G: (readable, but all the same <3) I TOLD YOU TO SHUT UP! I SAID, I DON'T KNOW. WE'RE GOING TO DIE HERE, UNDERSTAND?
G: Hey, look. *sigh* I'm sorry. I'm just... this isn't how I wanted to spend my last moments. Do you have a light so that I can at least see someone's face before I die? Or some food, I'm starving.
W: I don't have either. And I'm sorry too. I'm not the type to hold a grudge or ask stupid questions. I'm not some naive child, I'm pretty serious. I just- I just wanna get out of here, I don't want to die here. I wish this was a prank. I can totally see Miles doing something dumb like this. I know it's not, but... I can hope, y'know?
G: Yeah. Me too.
Haha, I guess I was being pretty lazy when I said I'd give you another page. I will, though. Another DRAWN one. For the record, the white balloons are Benji's,and the gray are a female's voice with a British accent (new charactor alert!) although Benji doesn't know what she looks like or her name.
Yes, I am aware that this is a little sloppy. Sorry-desu. I tried my best, and the lines from hereon out will be typed. I chose to make this page a bit darker colored, as the tone is a bit dark. I mean, our main charactor is falling into a manhole, for god's sake! Uh... what else? The manhole cover did not shrink, the manhole merely grew bigger to "capture" Benji for the game. What is the game? DUH DUH DUH....
Also, since I'm nice and I wanna draw some more, you're getting another update today. After this, I'll be away for about a week, but when I get back, you'll have 3 or 4 new pages! YAYS!
This uploaded in pretty bad quality, but I figured one bad q. image update is better than nothing! The scanner I'm using for the next two weeks IS NOT MY PERMANENT ONE. And this comic doesn't count for tomorrow. I'll see ya then. Comments?
And yes, in the next one the text will be computer written. I understand this is hard to read.
Hey everyone, welcome to Down the Rabbit Hole, a webcomic about life, love, lies, and the problems that come when you are basically battling your friends to the death. < 3 Seriously, that's what it's about. First comic to follow. Updates are MWF, unless I'm really busy, but I'll notify you beforehand so that you can cry on said day. I hope you like/ love/ adore.